The upper curve seems a bit odd but it could be distorsion from the camera. The kidneys reminds me of Peter Prier's bridges although yours are a bit more extreme. Overall I think it should work. It's much better than the second one IMO. Personally, I would shave off more wood from the legs. Perhaps you took away more wood than needed? Or maybe just enough. Why are you asking btw? It's also a question of who's gonna play it?